Re Write 1 Edit

The reason I had removed the "Shugenja and Society" section was because it is a word-for-word repeat of the second paragraph of the "Lifestyle" section of this very same article. It is redundant. Doji Shinsei 21:44, 9 December 2008 (UTC)

Ah. In that case, awesome catch. The reason I undid your removal was because there was no reasoning. I assumed there would be a reason, but until you told me I was going to keep it. Now that you have, I might either remove it or re-write it. Anywhich way, thanks for finding this one. --Majushi 14:28, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
Right. I've given the re-write a go. Do you reckon that'll be good enough? --Majushi 15:01, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
Should be fine. It just seemed a little wordy with two paragraphs saying the same thing. Sorry about not leaving a reason earlier; it's what I get for editing with no sleep. Doji Shinsei 19:57, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
Fair enough. --Majushi 08:56, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Re Write 2 Edit

I feel that this article have to be re-write again. A good article have to answer "What, who, why, when, how", and structure here don't fill this. Here is the structure :

  • 1 Power of the Shugenja
  • 2 Lifestyle
  • 3 Training
  • 4 Relationship with the Kami
  • 5 Shugenja and Society
  • 6 Shugenja and the Sword
  • 7 Shugenja and the Phoenix

For me, 1 and 4 have to be merged, 2 and 3 have to be merged, 5 and 6 have to be merged, 7 have to become "Shugenja throught Rokugan" and cover all the clans.

I can do it if necessary -- Goshimo 10:21, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. If you want to try to rewrite this feel free. I would say that 5 and 6 should not be merged, as the two are about two different aspects of Shugenja. One is how they are a part of society. One is specifically about their use of swords. 6 should probably be a sub section of 5 tho thinking about it... 7 needs to be expanded to include other clans, although the information that shugenja seem to be originated from the Phoenix should remain, even if it is disputed. I don't get why 2 and 3 have to be merged. One is about what training a shugenja goes through to learn their skills, while the other is how Shugenja live their lives. I would say that you can re-write this article, but I'll probably stick my head round and see what I think. Oh, and remember to reference. I know it's easy to write some of this stuff off of knowledge you already have, but it's good to back that up with a source. --Majushi 00:17, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
Okk, I do a first re-arrangement, without re-writing -- Goshimo 17:47, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

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