Togashi Mitsu could use some fine attention, mostly to help fill out some sections or to improve upon the already existing text. One area in particular would be The Oracle of Thunder section, which could use better sentence structure. If your not sure how best to do this feel free to read some of the source material, such as The Test of Enlightenment, Part 1 or any of the other references down at the bottom and either reword or add your own summarization of the events.
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